I have been very neglectful, and left you all hanging for quite a long time. I don't even have a good excuse - I've been distracted playing FFXIV, and with plumbing woes, and a bit of a reading binge.
Also, this isn't a very good chapter. Very little happens action-wise - it's more focused on Vanagar being consumed by social malaise, and while she does make some progression, it's way more fun to read about epic magics. It's a necessary progression, but I think if writing it now I'd set it during some discovery events, rather than sitting about re-iterating things we know already.
Showing posts with label inn. Show all posts
Showing posts with label inn. Show all posts
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24 May 2017
Inn Chap 2
In this installment of this abandoned project, we see that SGM was not the first time I've balanced an experienced and competent POV with a younger and untried one.
Vanagar is very different from Kendall. I quite like the character arc I had planned for her. In fact, since I stopped writing after she made the major progression on that arc, I suspect that the transition was what I wanted to write, and since it happens relatively early in the story, is why this is unfinished.
Vanagar is very different from Kendall. I quite like the character arc I had planned for her. In fact, since I stopped writing after she made the major progression on that arc, I suspect that the transition was what I wanted to write, and since it happens relatively early in the story, is why this is unfinished.
17 May 2017
An abandoned project - Inn Chap 1
I was just re-reading Sabriel, which I'm fairly sure was the inspiration of an old partial of mine with the working title of Inn. Then I started re-reading the old partial, instead of, y'know, working on things I intend to finish.
So I figure I shall spread the time-wasting around and give you the first few chapters of Inn over a couple of posts. There's a lot wrong with this story - it reads rather D&D-ish to me now, but I'm entirely amused by the situation. Don't read on if you like things like resolution, or endings...
[Caution: I am unkind to horses in this chapter. Reminiscent of a scene in Champion.]
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So I figure I shall spread the time-wasting around and give you the first few chapters of Inn over a couple of posts. There's a lot wrong with this story - it reads rather D&D-ish to me now, but I'm entirely amused by the situation. Don't read on if you like things like resolution, or endings...
[Caution: I am unkind to horses in this chapter. Reminiscent of a scene in Champion.]
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