tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post4447862510450732224..comments2024-03-23T10:46:37.375+11:00Comments on Autumn Write: Compilation CoversAndrea K Hösthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01535131780314094508noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-63880407557392683272011-09-04T13:59:44.828+10:002011-09-04T13:59:44.828+10:00Is there any way to close the gap between the firs...Is there any way to close the gap between the first and second letters in 'Touchstone'? I've just realised that that's what has been bothering me about the title, not the positioning on the page.Lexifabhttp://www.otherleg.com/lexifab2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-21878745158400157032011-09-04T10:05:52.125+10:002011-09-04T10:05:52.125+10:00Hi mehramilo! I'm glad you've been enjoyi...Hi mehramilo! I'm glad you've been enjoying the books. :)<br /><br />I'm torn between 3 and 4 as well. I've updated 3 to included a tag line to see if that will balance it...Andreahttp://www.andreakhost.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-68431278978528434592011-09-04T08:59:58.088+10:002011-09-04T08:59:58.088+10:00Hi! I've been reading your books for months, b...Hi! I've been reading your books for months, but have never posted. I've loved them all, though!<br /><br />So, number three is my favorite and if it was for a magazine it'd be absolutely perfect. I think of all the cover's it's the most succinct: there's a girl and she's about to touch something ephemeral. If you made use of the bottom right corner it might look less like a magazine, but I like it as is too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-33663345259746839422011-09-03T22:37:58.346+10:002011-09-03T22:37:58.346+10:00Yes, 4 is definitely better now ! Except or he &qu...Yes, 4 is definitely better now ! Except or he "black sky" not being black anymore. But now I guess we're more nitpicking than anything else ...TheSFReaderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14382773423096004794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-33192848003740369952011-09-03T16:15:59.757+10:002011-09-03T16:15:59.757+10:003 or 4 for me...possibly because you changed the b...3 or 4 for me...possibly because you changed the blue before I saw it. I thing 3 balanced better than 1 & 2, but 4 seems to fix thatJennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12909466417710679436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-34553542330948788852011-09-03T12:16:51.278+10:002011-09-03T12:16:51.278+10:00Replaced version 4 with a darker blue.Replaced version 4 with a darker blue.Andreahttp://www.andreakhost.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-79663581886404051372011-09-03T10:04:07.807+10:002011-09-03T10:04:07.807+10:00I like either 2 or 3 - I like being closer up on h...I like either 2 or 3 - I like being closer up on her face, and the bubble being larger. The intense blue of 2 is lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-3568864781930171292011-09-03T03:30:47.840+10:002011-09-03T03:30:47.840+10:00I Concur with Lexifab that a little more "int...I Concur with Lexifab that a little more "intense" color (especially the blue) adds to it.TheSFReaderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14382773423096004794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-37330290414253766212011-09-03T02:50:12.299+10:002011-09-03T02:50:12.299+10:00I like all of these covers - I'm not an artist...I like all of these covers - I'm not an artist, so I can't comment on the compositional aspects, but I find the girl with the bubble and the intrigued, questioning look on her face artistic. Thank you, thank you, thank you for not giving in to the trend to create another YA cover that looks like an adult romance cover, complete with standard model!Marilyn Peakehttp://www.marilynpeake.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-76691596389826853612011-09-03T00:31:37.496+10:002011-09-03T00:31:37.496+10:00Composition aside, I like the depth of contrast in...Composition aside, I like the depth of contrast in #2 the best.Lexifabhttp://www.otherleg.com/lexifab2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-63921237397384619722011-09-02T21:28:51.379+10:002011-09-02T21:28:51.379+10:00Hm - I've added a fourth option to see if I ca...Hm - I've added a fourth option to see if I can get that balance issue right.Andreahttp://www.andreakhost.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2110306069817949473.post-30334506730832422132011-09-02T21:13:15.160+10:002011-09-02T21:13:15.160+10:00I really like the general concept, and think you m...I really like the general concept, and think you may find your public with them.<br />The first one especially shows Cassandra choosing one bubble amongst 3, which I find more enticing.<br /><br />However, I find the composition for the three of them missing "balance" : the first one feels too empty on the righth side (especially upper), the second one on top, the third one at the bottom.TheSFReaderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14382773423096004794noreply@blogger.com